Antigone Cadmus

Hey, Amon! Sorry for the long wait... Asxz had me pretty busy critiquing her stuff. Finally, here is your review: Demetre Fox Something about this name is weird too me. ...

As Evi has once again stolen all my nit-picks. So here are the things you need to work on: I will summarize everything I have told you over the course ...

Hmmm... So it seems all the nit-picking has been done already by Evi and xxXDo. I suppose I will review on your overall appeal. Le Main Character MC needs a ...

Here, again, as requested, Asxz! ^_^ So you already of a ton of nit-pick reviews. Instead, I'm going to simply write an overall for you. Confusion Like Evi said to ...

Here as requested, Threnody! joyfully and nonchalantly to the sound of the cappella melody Hmmm. This is being extremely nit-picky, but "nonchalantly" means sort of unconcerned or apathetic. In my ...

Here as requested! Now that I could see, I fought the war to bottle the screams and take a look at the damage, or at least find the cause of ...

Hey, Asxz. Review number two, as requested! Posted: Wed Jan 21, 2009 3:33 am Post subject: Split personalities 1.1 Ouch! That hurt! Something about this line really bothers me. Instead ...

Here as requested, Asxz! I looked around at the murky surroundings, and at once I knew that I wasn’t supposed to be here. I agree with Nutty about changing the ...

Hey, Do! Sorry for the long wait... :oops: But I'm still here as requested! :wink: My stress does not contribute to the well-being of my house, I can tell you ...

Oh my Lord, I'm late reviewing this! By two days! Really, really, sorry Rosey. *offers cookies* When Jessica opened the front door, there was a bagful of hundred dollar bills ...

Hey, Maki-chan! Here as requested. I guess you liked my review of your Silent Hill fan fic, huh? Onto the review... "In which we meet two men, the shepherd and ...

Evermore by Alyson Noel The House of Night series by P.C. Cast Jinx by Meg Cabot the Medaitor Series by Meg Cabot. Night, did you just recommend Meg Cabot to ...

Hellooooooooooooo, Lucy! *thinks about shedding mercy* Mmmm, I think I shall shred. :) But it will be for the better. It was the year 2017 and the Inauguration of the ...

Eep... I always get nervous when reviewing your stuff... But, here as requested! My reason to compare these sources is to see how the same events differ when written in ...

Yay! Grammar check! *dances like a toddler* Anyway... The bushes and gnarled trees basked in the sunlight, smiling and the warm fuzzy glow. -- I think "and" should be changed ...